“Milkshake, do you know how this little mouse got here?” he asked. Leo can’t see a thing.” “How did this little mouse get here?” he wonders. The author has a habit of saying the same thing twice, for example “It is dark. The biggest problem with the story is the excessive wordiness. There was one typo that should be corrected, “someone in creeping up to Leo’s room”. The mouse hole in the wall is far too large. Also, Leo’s expression seems to be a constant grin. The illustrations are cute and bright although it is obvious that some head shots are copied from one page to the other. He takes it outside and releases it to the mouse family. Instead of killing it, Leo problem solves and captures it alive. His cat alerts him that a mouse is in the kitchen. This is a sweet story of a little boy who likes to pretend he is a superhero.
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